Hollow Poetry

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judging me

mistrusting me

barely understanding me

how can it be

this mystery

unableing you to really see

with clarity

what we could be

and leaving me

in agony

reduced to hollow poetry

the black and white

of feelings flight

is turning rainbows

into night

I ask of you

please trust the light

flawlessly imperfect

synchronicity reveals

the next step forward


4 thoughts on “Hollow Poetry

    Butty said:
    August 28, 2012 at 6:12 am

    Well said, can totally relate


      realityinprogress responded:
      August 28, 2012 at 10:02 am

      Thank you so much and thanks for taking the time to comment :)


    moses11 said:
    October 30, 2012 at 8:19 pm

    Great title, great poem. I picture a black and white picture as I read this. I don’t why


      realityinprogress responded:
      November 12, 2012 at 5:35 pm

      Thanks – I was experiencing a really cool flow when writing it! And the black and white actually makes a lot of sense..


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