Never Mind
*
oh
i’m sorry
i didn’t mean to disturb
it was really nothing
just a thought
it doesn’t matter
really
nothing original
probably irrelevant
definitely waste of time
just a feeling
not important
i’m sorry i disturbed you
i’ll be quiet now
never mind
March 25, 2012 at 12:16 pm
I had a mind flush with a feeling about a lonely echo. But I don’t know if you’re in the canyon. Not sure if I should climb down or yell. Might disturb the birds that you watch alone. Never mind. Thoughts fly away if there is no food.
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March 25, 2012 at 12:24 pm
I love it.
Thank you.
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March 25, 2012 at 12:38 pm
Thanks. Maybe I should make the comment into a poem. But I could never decide if “never mind” should be two words or one. I think maybe the separate is the correct one but maybe I could endure the spell check scolding long enough to compose some arrangement.
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March 25, 2012 at 2:20 pm
Well it felt like a poem – and a good one :)
I think it could be a nevermind but maybe in a different context..? I’d love to see whatever you come up with.
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March 25, 2012 at 8:09 pm
I had a mind flush with
a feeling about a lonely echo, but
I don’t know if you’re in the canyon.
Not sure if I should climb down or yell.
Might disturb the birds that you watch alone. Never mind.
Thoughts fly away if there aren’t sufficient crumbs, but
I have bread, or
I could get crackers, but
like the hole in the rocky,
there are holes in the world.
I can’t believe the world is
Swiss cheese
I’d rather have Danish blue cheese
and whine about wine, but
I guess if I tried
I could skate on Swiss slices
like holy snow, until
you are in the chalet
— Douglas Gilbert
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March 25, 2012 at 9:41 pm
Oh I really love how it turned out!
Thank you so much for sharing it :)
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